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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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There are a few things. First of all, I do like the depth, but in a sense, I think perhaps if you focused closer to the front it would have added a little more depth.
We can't see what's behind where your photos starts, which is good (and impossible), but good because if you focused on the first one, we wouldn't know there weren't more behind.
I think maybe if you had a only a few out of focus in the front and focused a little closer up, the strawberries would seem to go further back.
I also like the different lengths of the strings. It makes it feel more arbitrary and natural than it would seem planned and measured out. Same with the array of space and sizes. You achieved a great 3D sort of effect.
The lighting is also excellent as is the background color in general. It really draws out the bright colors. All together, amazing work!
TORi
((( please do not pay attention to the stars, the critique is in what I wrote )))
The lighting on this is wonderful and I find it absolutely lovely and brilliant that you chose to focus on one strawberry. Most people would have taken an overall shot to show off their cleverness, which would have been an interesting photograph but not an brilliant one. Here you chose to bring that one strawberry into sharp focus, trusting the viewer to be taken in by the rest of your idea, your piece after being drawn in by that one berry.
The depth and detail of thiswork is wonderful. Brilliant, brilliant work.
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